Songs To Live And Die By

by aDORKable x3   May 16, 2007


Influenced by Phantom of the Opera, the book Twilight, and Edgar Allen Poe's Cast of Amantialgo ((sp?)

```````````````````````````

A deadly melody, played with a deadly tune -
You knew your time was coming, and soon.
But it dragged you in and wouldn't let go;
Taking you to a place you didn't know.
The way was laden with cobwebs and dust,
But getting there, to the end, was a must.

A phantom appeared and said, "Don't be worried.
We have to leave, I don't mean to be hurried."
So you took his hand; it was cold as ice.
His smile enticed you; it was kinda nice.
His eyes, they flashed a fiery green;
Something like that, you have never seen.

The notes got louder as you went your way;
It was so deep you couldn't tell night from day.
"Only a little farther, my dear. I promise it's close."
For some reason, you believed your gut the most.
Ypu knew that this might not be so good;
As the stones began to be replaced with wood.

It reminds you of a story you once read -
Immediately, he recites the words in your head.
Startled, you pull away, ready to run;
But he anticipated this and laughed as if he won.
The music suddenly stopped and you begin to cry.
"These, my dear, are Songs To Live And Die By."

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    ...and this is why you earned yourself a winning place in my contest. :]

    It was excellent then, and I still hold that same opinion. Nothing else to say, really. I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, this deserves way more than a five. I miss you my Dear Ciao, come back soon?! :[ .

    There was one thing I noticed, however...in the line "Ypu knew that this might not be so good;" 'ypu' should be 'you' other than that, it was flawless.

    (I love Phantom of the Opera. :] )

    5.5
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Wow.
    this was awesome
    i had to sing Phantom of the Opera's
    Music of teh night and Phantom of the opera.

    which makes me like this poem even better.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i realy liked this. this will be the first poem to add to my fave poems. i enjoyoed it very much. and so you know there were grammar errors, so you may want to read through again so that it makes sense. 5/5.

    and twilight is awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    All are excellent books, as this is a excellent poem ciao, love the flow, as always its a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!