Prisoner Of Love

by LithiumSacrifice   May 17, 2007


Prisoner Of Love

I'm a prisoner of war.
Prisoner of my own love.
To my heart I swore.
I have an angel watching above.

Whispering within the air,
Where I thought I heard no sound.
To this day I swear,
By white wings I was found.

The eyes they had stole,
Tell me I am wrong.
I feel angels touch my soul,
"Don't worry, it wont be long."

This heart had collided,
Into a concrete wall.
No battle is ever one sided.
These angels wont let me fall.

I thought the world was empty.
That no angels lived in this place.
Suddenly they showed me,
When I looked up at your face.

I'm a prisoner of war.
Prisoner of my own love.
To my heart I swore.
I have an angel watching above.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "I thought the world was empty.
    That no angels lived in this place.
    Suddenly they showed me,
    When I looked up at your face."
    Beutiful lines...cute n true too...well penned..i liked the way u've repeted the opening n closing stanza..n the love portrayed as a war is a very creative idea..kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Beautiful, and inspiring, you have done a wonderful job here. The flow sucked me in, and emtions blew me away. the word choice was amazing, on this well penned, well wriiten work. Sheer beauty deserves nothing less than 5/5 yet so much more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautifuly written...I was pulled in with the opening stanza and from there on it just got better and better.
    Flow was flawless throughout, imagery beautifully used and the ending intense and a perfect way to wrap up.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Excellent work. Keep writing and sharing.

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