Little Spider

Very bomb poem! lol i would prefer patron but jack works too. lol umm right here u should change tho.

"Just doing what you please
In this damn ninety degree heat"

instead of "In this damn ninety degree heat"
u shoulda put
"Just doing what u please
in this damn ninety degrees."
hope u like my little change ::P peace!

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Bill,

Oh where have you gone, Billy Boy, Billy Boy
Oh where have you gone... Charming Billy

What kind of drugs were you doing and how much jack did you use to wash them down.

lol

Great stuff, dear friend. Nice to see you writing a little humor.

Always,
Jeannie

This is deff original thanks for sure i love how you came up with this and your words were great you used them well keep it up

Bill
Wow must have been some real good pills :) Very creative piece. Great imagery.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy