When Children Cry

by Twisted Heart   May 18, 2007


Shards of glass
cut porcelain skin
Dark eyes turned brass
from deep within

Angel wings
with feather tips
Singed with sorrow
by moistened lips

From deep in
a heart has died
A soul was silenced
and set aside

Then gladly
comes the tender rain
Washing away
a child's pain..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is such a sad write. The imagery and word choices are great. I read this on the main boards yesterday. You did a excellent job. Very heartfelt.

    Angel wings
    with feather tips
    Singed with sorrow
    by moistened lips

    This stanza really stuck in my mind.
    Excellent!
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Oh this is so sad, but you choice of words is absolutely peferct and sets the tone very well.