Thinking Of Love

by Brittany C   May 19, 2007


She sits on her bed
thinking only of him.
The smell of his cologne
and the fell of his hands.

Wondering how long
such a wonderful thing
could last in this world knowing
that nothing can last forever.

She hopes that it won't end
this feelings he makes her feel.
The way he is always there for her
and the way he holds so close.

He might be the one
her only one true love.
She realizes that now
but how will she tell him?

She guesses that only time will tell.
If their love will last forever
So she dreams of their love
lasting through the test of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I'm sorry.
    I'm going to sound like an old woman but.
    I dont' have my glasses so my spelling might not be correct
    And I might be reading things incorrectly.

    and the fell of his hands.
    That didn't make sense.
    Do you mean the smell?
    I mean, fell is a verb.
    I think you're looking for an adjective.

    I noticed that you didn't use some of your punctutation correctly.
    You needed more of them, hun.

    All in all, it was okay.
    I'm not a lover so...
    I can't really grade that well.
    But I do know a lot about grammar,

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    Good poem! great! keep up the good work
    ps please comment mine if you have time <smile>
    ~hazel~

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Now that w2as perfectly wriiten, I loved this poem Excellent word choice, deep emtion, and flowed wonderfully. Exceelent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's a good feeling when all you can do is think of this one person who makes you happy, while knowing at that moment there doing the same thing. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesia

    This poem was truly perfect! I enjoyed reading every minute of it. I don't think I would change anything. Great work!

    Alesia

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