Miss you baby

by Boy   May 19, 2007


I miss you girl miss the way
we walk Miss the way we talk
miss the way you smile

Till long mile miss the way and
the day when we embraced first time
And remember I kissed you lips first
time and you know it was not one sided

When I walk near the roads the
shops I miss the time we spend together
I miss you I know I did some mistakes

I said you sorry many times but you
were gone from my life I miss you allot
I love you I miss you I am sorry

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I hope the girl forgave the writer of this poem.. I know the feeling when everything you see around reminds you about this love you had.. Everything..the places you use to be, the things you used tot do..

    I guess I have very wild imagination 'cause I can even "see" (imagine) how we looked like there sitting in the cafe and looking each other in eyes..

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

    goD blesS yoU....

    >>>>>luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    In this poem, i love the way that you use repetition. It really strengthens the whole idea of loss within a person. It prmotes a kind of sad appea but cute because love so pure is hard to come across in a modern society.

    Nice piece of work hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this...the sadness behind the words is very deep, and it is easy for the reader to sense your regret.
    beautiful imagery and word choice, and perfect flow throughout.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Another nicely written poem. I did enjoy reading this bittersweet piece.

    Take care now.

    -Marian (^^,)

    5/5

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