Locked door

by bleedingtears   May 19, 2007


A locked door a rusty razor a towel stained with red a teenage girl lies there dead her emotions were in a tangle her grey world begins to swirl she was once mommy's little angel and daddy's little girl.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Nicely done, :) and thanks for mthe comment on my poem. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is very sad and heartfelt. The emotion carried very well in so few words. Keep writing.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    I really like that!!! its amazng! i love the end! 5/5

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