Lies there dead.

by bleedingtears   May 20, 2007


Crying and weak she falls to her knees an blood drips from her wrist wanting to die and leave the pain behind trying to get up she falls back down people tell her what goes around comes around but she just wants life over with she picks up the gun and outs it to her head after that night she lies there dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Matt

    Nice poem...it carrys a message I think most people here can relate too

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I luv it. Poetry is a graet way to express urself and this poem reminds me of me cuz i sumtimes(ok alot of times) feel like that.

  • 16 years ago

    by nai

    So powerful, i almost felt i there.
    i hope you dont feel like this though!
    great piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow
    u have a lotta talent w/ these short words!
    5/5
    stay strong!!!
    im here

    Jenieo

  • 16 years ago

    by Brook

    Wow, that sound like what my sister would do... That poem was so awesome!!!

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