Be Careful What You Wish For

by Zeus   May 19, 2007


Be careful what you wish for
next time you get in a fight.
Because one day you will realize
that your love was taken from your sight.
And your wish came true
but you can't take it back.
Then your own words
will leave you hurt and cracked.
So be careful what you say
and always watch your words.
Because you will always regret it
when you're the one who's hurt.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I have not get read one of your poems that I dislike again a very well written piece I really don't know what else to say about your work its all very good. I see nothing in this poem that could be changed to make it better.

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    *applauds*
    Great poem! The flow was nice and worked well with how it was written. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesia

    So true. There's not much to say about this poem, just the fact that it's true. I'm glad you decided to write such a poem. Great work

    Alesia

  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Life is indeed part of knowing what to say. Your poems reminds me of the bible that tells that over and over again

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem...short n to the point...u've done a wonderful job by writing this 1...good work!
    5/5!!
    xxPoojaxx

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