Set free

by Jenie   May 20, 2007


Life was harsh
until i met you
had to work hard
nothing i could ever do

i hated waking up
just to see i made it through a night
but now that you are here
I'm grateful for this life

i would cry myself to sleep
to weak to even pray
now that you hold my hand
i have so much to God, to say!

i had no respect for myself
not proud of who i had become
then you said i was better than that
and the past could be un-done

hated who i was
i despised my own life
thats when i opened my heart
and took away my knife

like i said before
life was not very good to me
until i met you
finally, i have been set free

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  • 16 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Its very well written.
    good job. [:

  • 16 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    I liked this piece alot! You should try writting something with a twisted ending. Alot of people on here write straight happy or straight sad. I enjoy pieces that start happy and end tradgically. =P But thats just something I enjoy. I would love to see something like that from a writter such as yourself =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Awww i love this poem. it is very emotion. good job.`