Invisibility

by firexdancer   May 20, 2007


When your eyes are black with dew,
even lies of tongue are blue,
a book you'll find, a book you'll see,
titled; "invisibility".
now read these words aloud as you turn,
the pages, while your heart still burns.

"please forgive me and forget,
as the wretched sun does set,
just as the stars dissapear by day,
leave my being to forever play.
please let my soul go wander free,
so that i can, truly, find me.

leave my body to the earth,
as the trees surpass it's girth,
give my voice up to the wind,
for every cloud its' breeze does skim.
but throw my heart into the water,
for of true love, i have no other.

so here i am, a life to slay,
for all my wrongs i will now pay,
as my hands fall to the sky,
one last breath my lungs will sigh.
please just give me wings so i can flee,
and join the realms of invisibility.

as i have spoken these pure words,
so easy, can already hear the song of birds,
let my fears go far away,
my dreams forever now to stay.
and once upon a broken time,
a princess, spoke her final line."

when the whispers are no more,
waves of breath on distant shore,
only the beat of heart so faintly throbs,
slowing down as if through mud it plods.
and so the keen of death does start,
white lips slowly spread apart.

a smile forms on a mouth of scars,
now so real, tribute to the stars,
with hair blown back as if a breeze,
had come to let it rest in peace.
and on those lips a song does kiss,
a promise of eternal bliss.

another life is now over,
be proud, for she was a brave soldier,
but sometimes words must leave the tongue,
or else a song will go unsung.
so listen when i tell you that,
true happiness, she has finally met.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Brutally honest, babe.
    Umm...
    Lack of originality.
    Flow was pretty slow.
    Rhyming was really forced.

    I didn't even finishe it.
    I was just... bored with it.

    Sorry.
    I won't vote.
    I'm probably going to vote this a 3.

    I shall respect your decision.
    If you DO want me to vote.
    Say yes on a PM.
    If no, I'll understand.

    I really am sorry.

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Your poems are absouletly amazing. This one speaks to me of the inner pains of yourself and how sometimes you just wish you were invisible to the rest of the world and that they would just leave you alone. You captured the emotion in this poem perfectly. The flow and rhyme and everything just made this poem wonderful. It was a wonderful write and a better read. I absoultely loved it! I honestly can't express how happy your comment on my poem made me and how much that meant. Thank you so much. 5/5 for sure.

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I loved thip oem too. You gave of more than one meaning so people can interpret it there own way. I lvoe how your poetry leaves your audience open to wonder.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very nice poem. I loved the flow. It was a longer one but you made it work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The imagery left me breathless, omg that was so amazing, it spoke to my soul and keep my attention all the way til the end, absoulty perfect, there is no way to improve on perfection. I love this really keep writting you are so talented. 5/5

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