* I won 1st place in a contest when I entered it! I'm so happy!!*
I erase your name,
And those thousands of little hearts,
From my notebook.
But it's so many pages,
So many memories to keep erasing.
Your face keeps appearing,
And your name aches in my heart.
Every slow beat in a slow song,
Beats back ever second that I felt safe.
Every honk of a car,
Makes me remember back when,
You just didn't want to say good-bye.
I envy every couple I see,
Because they're feeling what,
I always wanted the most.
And I hate her the most,
Because she's hugging away,
The days of what I enjoyed the most.
They say to forget you,
But how can I,
When what made me most happy,
Is who I sacrificed almost everything too,
And how can I when,
You're still all I think about,
And all I'm living for.
Just watching you,
Rocking on the edge of my life,
With nothing left to pull you back.
What I've done was nothing,
But let you walk away.
I really hope you know that you have talent and that talent I hope you ever stop writing because you are really good.. it would be a wst eif you dtopped... good job and keep it up.. srry there isn't anything abiut the poem that I would change anyway .. good job once again 5/5
Ok, i guess you already know i LOVE this poem...
i don't exactly know why, but this poem is like amazing! it really got to me when i was first reading it, and i thought there was like so much emotion in it. after i read those first three lines, i already knew i was going to love it, and i was not dissappionted.
great job with this, it's really one of my absolute favorites on here!