Hey this was great wallace I liked it alot... The poem was very well writen, deep and beautiful...
Also I like it when people try different styles... never seen this one before =)

Good job man and keep writing

You've done a great job on this, the flow was a little jumpy in places but it doesn't really matter
You've still done a great piece
I love triolets
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

"A lover's passion stained with rust
Swept away like a flock of doves"

Really enjoyed this poem. I like the simile you used, it sounded really good and fitted in perfectly with the poem. I thought it had a really good flow. (Maybe us Aussies count syllables differently) lol :]

Take Care.

Beautiful poem, with beautiful word choice and strong emotions portrayed. I liked this poem alot Wallace. Nice style used. Deep poem. Well done~mel

Well done! this is a hard structure but you were able to do it! You're really talented keep it up! good choice of words to! 5/5!

Too* sorry about that ^_^

Excellent poem beautifully written 5/5

Wow thats really good.. i love it.. great work 5/5
xx

"For thou has stole thy gift of love" (sic) (= It should be "stolen" to be grammatically correct.)

"Taken and destroyed by one(')s lust"

My apologies for being nit-picky over there. =] Other than that, it's a nicely-written Triolet on the whole. This endears me completely because its diction (and/or old English tone of voice) is one of my favorite reads when it comes to literary works. It haven't given any images or visuals whatsover until the simile was shown, "Swept away like a flock of doves" - I like that!

It's a sad, melancholic piece about a waning love drifting swiftly as the "flock of doves." Lovely write, brother! xD

-Debbie Cakes

Wallace this one is superb. Love is really a gift and its more lucid with the light of your poem. great 5/5

Wow... You have an amazing way with words. I loved every single line of this, because they didn't lose their beauty even if they were repeated. Great job with this!

Wow, this was beautiful. I'm very impressed. I've never seen a triolet written in this kind of language (old English), but I enjoyed it a lot. :)

You have written an excellent poem here! 5/5

THIS IS SO AWESOME.... I LOVE THIS< KEEP IT UP.

::MELI::

This one is interesting. I have never seen this style before. Great job though.

This is an amazing poem, it completly took my breath away, the launguage was beautiful, and the flow was flawless. You are very talented. It was such a heatfelt written peice, full of meaning and emotions. Though it was short it was the perfect length. Great Job.
xxx

Good poem lots of feeling injoyable

Great poem wallace...

and even though im not that familiar with this particular poetry form,i thought it sounded great..the flow was good ...it was just written perfectly..nice job.5/5

Suck strong words were used! this was very well done! and i loved the read!

I liked the repation in this piece however I do feel its a shame this was written as a triolet as I belive this poem needed to be a little longer.