Perfect night

by BreeAnna   May 22, 2007


A soft spoken sound,
in the middle of the night,
I turn my head around,
and flip on the light.

I see you looking down,
kneeling on your knee,
I didnt know what to think,
what was coming to me?

my hand pulled to your's,
my heart beating faster,
both silent for minutes,
then broken by laughter.

Your smile grows wider,
as we step into the bright light,
you took something out of your pocket,
I felt a small amount of fright.

You look into my blue eyes,
and pull back my hair,
and promised me the world,
right then, right there.

we sat by the fire,
flames almost touching the sky,
I looked into your face,
and realized I found my guy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    =D well written. Your use of imagery was fantastic. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Ur perfect night is really a perfect poem with overflowing feelings n good rhymes. wow great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is an excellent poem, the flow is excellent in this one and the topic is sweet. I liked the last stanza best, it really ended the poem nicely. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww.. veryy sweet poem.. the flow was amazing and very easy to read.. excellent job.. I really enjoyed it and it made me smile. Keep it up =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was an interesting poem , quite enjoyeable to read liked it alot Very sweetly written. Well done with this nicely penned poem~mel

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