As I See It

by Leah20   May 25, 2007


Please substantiate the following claims.

Existence
I can see it
But I cannot feel it
I'm immersed in it
Yet I don't belong
I wish I had a
Purpose
In searching
You will come up with one thing
And one thing alone
Love
But I can't feel it
I can't see it
My heart hast turned a blind eye
I see only
Lust
Primitive desire
Spread over with a facade
Of beauty and selflessness
One true desire
Self-gratification
A perpetuation of the cycle
Accidents bring
More and more into
Existence.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssa Marie

    That... ..was beautiful. It felt really "in the moment" I like the aim for simplicity, but imagery in emotions.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Amazing poem. Your words deeply lured in your readers. I've never read a poem like this before and I enjoyed it very much.

    Take care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem I found it to hold such strong emotion and truth which you portrayed well into this. Thoughtful it had me thinking and I never lost interest at all. From start to finish this had me hooked. Well done on this an enjoyable and interesting read. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5 you truely deserve it with this. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow this is a thought prvoking poem

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