The mission.

by Krzysztof J   May 25, 2007


They dumped me in the Forrest,
Alone and by myself,
Six cliks away from the LZ,
On a mission i would not fail.

I did not know my target,
Well not so personally,
Just the crimes he committed,
The fury burned in me.

As the night was settling in,
I hid upon the hill,
Waiting for the sunrise,
And for the thrill of the kill.

He murdered countless children,
And women in their sleep,
Crimes against humanity untold,
And for that he must be killed.

No court would do him justice,
Nor the ones that suffered too,
So it came down to me,
To see his judgment thru.

Thru the scope i saw him,
A pathetic little wrench,
So i squeezed the trigger,
And now the scum is dead.

The mission never happened,
The man you never knew,
The black ops are not spoken of,
But we are human too.

**Sorry Boss i just had to**

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    That's true...we are human too
    nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Olivia

    Hey thanks for all the great comments. I haven't had time to comment back.

    This one...wow, probably one of the best of yours i've read. i like it...A LOT. 5/5.
    :]] keep commenting/rating.
    Always great to know how im doing.

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    Wow this poem is like really great the flow and everything in it went together so well i give it a 5/5 you make my poems look bad lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow! great poem as usual =]
    my God your so talented, liked the flow and subject of this =] weldone.
    5/5 as always.

    ~*~*Jen~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Hey man long time since my last visit... dunno if u still remember me.. but since ur one of my favorites i had to check ur latest poems. this one i must admit is just a 3/5 to me when it comes to the writing. shit i hate doing bad critics... however i liked the topic n story very original and yeah i agree with Aussie above: i was too in the action so in some ways it was a good poem it's just that in my opinion it's not one of ur best ones

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