What to Write

by StonedGooberz   May 25, 2007


Hmmm... what to write

Candle so black
My heart bleeds red
Am I going to die?
Am I already dead?

She loves me
She loves me not
Staring down the barrel
But I did not hear the gunshot

Tears fall upon the floor
Slits upon my wrists, such broken hands
Twisted is my soul
U will never completely understand.

I can't be saved
And never really did
Love within my soul
The devil my master forbids.

He has claim over me
Claim over what I feel
His grasp so uncontrollable
So.... Unreal

The flame in the candle
It burns my skin
Drowning in misery and alcohol
It's no longer make-pretend

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  • 16 years ago

    by FindingGestalt

    This is cool, your poems seem to have a bluntness around them that bring out the images your poems talk about so that you can picture them, 5/5, keep it up, and check mine out sometime

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Basically what im trying to do is take the stanza's in the poem and turn them into their own poems...like candle so black, then it will go to she loves me, and so on and so forth.... just look at the other poem called candle so black and u will understand... hope u enjoy

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