How A Resurrection Really Feels.

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 25, 2007


Burning a cross in the forgotten fields,
Feel the fire across your eyes.
Harsh heat scars into your skin,
Burning within every new lie.

Field set ablaze on a horrific night;
Twas so bright you couldn't see the moon.
This is Jesus's tomb where he was resurrected;
I wonder how it feel to be forgotten this soon.

Losing something so precious to you,
You're own place is gone and there's nothing you can do,
You may be God, but you can't interfere with life,
Until, that is, the end of the world comes on cue.

Maybe this is how it must feel,
With tears streaming down His face.
His children have betrayed him again,
And left the holy scene in haste.

Field set ablaze on a horrific night;
Twas so bright you couldn't see the moon.
This is Jesus's tomb where he was resurrected;
I wonder how it feel to be forgotten this soon.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved it, a lot.
    Makes you wonder, eh?
    Amazing flow, wording, and emotion.
    Outstanding emotion, to be exact.

    keep it up, hun

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I can't believe there was only one vote on this before me, what is going on with this site? Lol.

    "Maybe this is how it must feel,
    With tears streaming down His face.
    His children have betrayed him again,
    And left the holy scene in haste."

    ^^ Those lines were amazing, I loved them.

    The imagery in this poem really stood out, it was different which is good, ;]

    5.5
    :]
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by GemmaR

    Good poem - i liked it