More than a poem

by Boy   May 26, 2007


No happiness in that life
That she has showed me
in her eyes But always tried
to get rid Of the loves things

All the sorrows was for me
And the pains I received in her love
I cannot forgot those all memories

Standing alone on the shore
I have seen the storm that
Were coming to murder my thoughts

Every movement I felt her touches
Inside my body there were cold voices
Covering the warmth of my heart

Every day in her thoughts
Every night in her memories
Like a crazy boy I have spent

between hundreds yesterdays
there is my yestreday and my
every today in thinking about her

A person who was a special light for me
is becoming the dark dream which is
shading its wings on my face and say
me to close my eyes for forever

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "Standing alone on the shore
    I have seen the storm that
    Were coming to murder my thoughts

    Every movement I felt her touches
    Inside my body there were cold voices
    Covering the warmth of my heart"

    This is my favourite part of the poem. You painted very alive picture in my mind.. A dark sky, a black thunder cloud, her evil thought moving there.. I feel cold to think about this..

    One thing I must tell you is you have really a beautiful mind..

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You're right about one thing! This is definitely more than a poem! It's love straight from the heart! Beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    Is it Naseeba......well anyways it is a really nice poem i like it alot....

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Well done and keep writing, the love in this poem was amazing.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!..i mean this is soo touching,...n a great way to scream out the name of your old love.."Naseeba"..u've penned the name so perfectly with ease thru the poem...great style n good job too..
    Touching poem
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

Read All Comments (9)

More Poems By Boy