Those Evil Eyes

by Stephanie Naylor   May 26, 2007


I see it in your evil eyes.
Their serpent slits so deep.

I feel the shudder in my bones...
From the secrets that they keep.

And as they stare down on me,
The dominance that they vie...

Sends a shiver down my bones
And makes me want to die.

They tell a tale of insolence.
Of a destined thats denied.

Of a soul that's crucified.
Of life's and loves despised.

I see it in your evil eyes.
I want to look away.

I see it in your evil eyes...
Where evil falls to play.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    It great!
    I love it, I can just imagine those evil slit eyes lol.

    For some reason... It reminds me of Voldemort from Harry Potter lmfao!

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    A well written poem. Mysterious and dark, the way I like it. 5/5 ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is good, very unique. I don't like wording to much but atmosphere is still great.
    I feel the shudder in my bones...
    From the secrets that they keep. -these is my favorite stanza. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved the rhyming in this, it was really good, it flowed well. you are a good writer, keep it up
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is frikken awesome!
    I adore this...
    The opening really pulled me in, it was very intense and hardhitting and from there on it just gets better and better.
    I particularly loved the ending, it was beautiful and stunning at the same time.

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