Corruptor and farmer

by unknown   May 28, 2007


You are corruptor
I'm a farmer

Your son
plays golf
My son
plays kite

I used my savings
for my daughter a doll
You used your change
for your daughter dolls

Your wives
do some treatments
My wife
do some dirty works

Your houses
more luxurious than Disneyland
My poor house
worse than barn

Your cars
faster than cheetah
My bike
as slow as my feet

But,

My children
get their parents' affection
Your children
get their nanny's affection

My wife
loves me
Your wives
love your money

My family
proud of my hard work
Your family
embarrassed of your dirty work

I
do my works gladly
You
do your works worriedly
People
give me wage
People
give you bribe

At least,
there are something
you don't have but I...
Thanks God to be so fair...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very useful and meaningful poem with the appropriate flow and lexis used. I like the idea or the imagery behind this piece. 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is fantastic. Well done!!! You wrote this poem excellently. Topic is superbly good and message is also great. I really enjoyed in this piece. It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    An eliminated comparative..different subject and so good vocabulary
    The flow keeps you going too

    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Krazikoko

    Aww I like the topic about the comparrison on which reeeally has more. Ur reeally in tune with the world aren't you?

  • 16 years ago

    by Tessa

    Absolutely great. I love the 2 sides and how true this poem is! Keep up the good work!