The Reasons I Cry....

by NeroB00   May 28, 2007


These are the reasons i cry, when the pain is too deep that it burns my insides. when my days are too dark, and my nights are too long, when my body's too weak and my strength isnt strong. when the worlds problems become my burdens, and the "It'll get betters" stop working. when i stop asking GOD for help and just sit in place, and the hurt thats there cant be erased....

these are the reasons i cry, when the tears from my heart drown my soul, and i feel like dying at only 6teen yrs. old. when my spirit dies and my mind goes to sleep, cus the pain inside i can no longer keep. when i havent anymore love and my tears run dry. when my body shuts down and i can no longer try. when my life is over and i mentally die. these are the reasons, the reasons i cry.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Untamed

    5/5 good poem. keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by 0laura0

    The lines in this are amazing,

    'when my body's too weak and my strength isnt strong'

    highlights the whole poem and the second stanza flows brilliantly and sounds beautiful.

    Almost brought a tear to my eye.

    L

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    Very heart wrecking, i can feel pain from this poem... amazing

    -love whitney-

  • 16 years ago

    by Kait

    I loved this poem. its was really good!! keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was good flow and transition, good words good reasons 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.