A Life Lost

by NeroB00   May 28, 2007


Bang bang as the gun explodes, a loud shriek as the bullet pierces his soul. hearts racing minds spinning, who could bring this boys life to an ending? people running, ducking, screaming and crying. as i sit there and watch him dying. a fresh white t now covered in red, two shots to the heart and one to the head. as his eyes start to close, and his breathing gets deeper, tears come to my eyes as his heart gets weaker. lying in my arms, his body's getting cold, and his spirit is starting to rise. his body starts shaking as he begins to die. now im asking GOD to help him through, but i guess GOD didnt want that prayer to come true. he looks at me an says "sis, it'll get better, and no matter what we'll always be together" and wit that said he completely dies, and i lay my head on his chest and continued to cry. wishing my tears could bring him back, now im thinking bout how mom is going to react. realizing i miss the little things, how i watched you grow from a prince into a king. hurting cus i miss u but happy cus youre safe, jus letting u know Marcel you'll never be replaced............

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. powerful poem
    i no it's not my buisness but did this really happen?
    well anyways it's beautiful and so touching
    loved it 5/5