Why me?

by xo kisses xo   May 29, 2007


A beautiful girl
In love with a boy
Held so much love for him
Then oneday
While she was on the phone with him
Everything stopped
No talking
No breathing
Then the only thing that was heard
Was a tear
Hitting the ground
That was the moment
He said it was over
She dropped her phone
Fell on her knees
Cried
And asked "Why me?"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    I agree with Tricky Daze. You really did create an image. While reading this, i pictured this really happenening to someone. great job! 5/5 from me, and thanks for all of the comments!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You really created an image..but just a thing caught my eyes
    oneday=One day

    Other than that
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by always in my heart

    Very beautiful <3 like it very much

    x-MeGGie

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