Romance{{acrostic}}

I love this.
Very beautiful and touching, and such beautiful imagery portrayed throughout.
Alot of the time acrostics come across as unfinished because people can't find the right words, but this was definietly worth the read...beautiful work with this.

Your beginning?
Wonderful, dear.
It's very... discriptive and very, very clear.
Also, I loved the flow of where you're going.

All is [[so]] serene there [[is]] no reason for alarms;
I don't like the word so.
I think it's childish.
Just what a regular teenager would say.
Also, your is is supposed to be "are"
Just verb conscion is all.

Your ending?
I love it.
It's.. musical almost.
Eck.
What am I saying.
Lol.
But still.
Your flow was wonderful.
Your grammar was a bit off at some points,
But it was okay.
All in all.
Wonderful write, dear.
5/5?

Awww this was really sweet.. and usually with acrostics some rhymes seem forced but this was very nicely written and everything flowed very well.. excellent job. and thanks for the comment =]

Very nice poem. I loved the flow and the word choice and the image. I gave it 5/5.

Aww very cute
i loved it
great use of words
wonderful job