Grooming Love

by OHgreenman   May 30, 2007


Roots firmly planted in life
Limbs wired and molded
Growing slowly over years
Lushes greenery unflolded

Sunshine for strength
Water needed for existence
Perfect balance of nature
Tray of coexistence

Love like a Bonsai tree
Patiently takes shape
Prune and feed it properly
Results in beautiful scape

Clean the tray of old soil
Replace with fresh and new
Let's become the Bonsai tree
Perfect for all to view

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  • 16 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    This was so unique and so beautiful... I don't even know what to say. It's as if I escaped reality for a moment while I was reading this. Wow. There are very few poems that do that to me... You are definitely talented!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh Greenie, what can I say.... this is one hell of a write, beautiful, precious and loving.... creative, unique, shall I go on???? Well done sir, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this!
    The imagery you portrayed in this was beautiful, and I adore the ending, I finished reading with a great big idiotic smile on my face haha

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Where did you get this stuff from? I love it! It's awesome...so different and unique but beautiful!!!!! This was very creative...nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh green one i was taken by this piece...beautifully penned. That special someone is very lucky!!