Why can't you just.
by Krzysztof J Jun 1, 2007
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16 years ago
by Kelsie
Wow, this is really good.
i like this line a lot man
"You read those stupid mags,
Those crazy novels too
Yet when a real heart is calling,
You rip it right in two!"
5/5 good job -
16 years ago
by reborn
Ah u said u lost ur inspiration but this one denies that statement. 4/5
best of it 4 me was:
"Why cant you just be honest?
Why cant you just be true?
Why cant you just be faithful?
Is that too much for you?"
"You read those stupid mags,
Those crazy novels too
Yet when a real heart is calling,
You rip it right in two!" -
16 years ago
by Jen
So heart felt this is :)
broken hearts are hard to fix, but not all girls listen to the stupid magazines and books.
Im sure u'll find a lovely girl soon :)
i get where this is coming from and i loved reading it :)
as always a great poem ^_^
~*~Jen~*~ -
16 years ago
by Cathy
BTW thank you for your comment on my Beautiful poem! Oh and on the comment above I meant to say you will not I will sorry! But yeah you will!!!
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16 years ago
by Cathy
Another great poem! I don' t know why some girls are like this, I guess those ones should have been born men just kidding! (Some men) and its those ones that mess it up for the rest of us. There's always someone better, I have yet to find out but I'm sure along the road I will. Again a very great write, I always enjoy reading your new poems. 5/5
