Alone (Nonet)

by Anaisthitos   Jun 3, 2007


This is the story of a girl, torn
apart from the inside on out
living in a lonely world;
living like she's OK,
trying to be strong.
Lay in bed she
cries. She is
on her
own.

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Nonet

A nonet is a poem with 9 lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line has eight, the thirds has seven, the fourth has six, the fifth has 5, the sixth has four, the seventh has 3, the eighth has 2 and the ninth line has only 1 syllable.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is like Etheree form and I know it takes a lot of effort and lot of dedication to write these rule-governed poems. I liked your work coz its just one of my fav types plus you have added so much meaning with those very precise wordings. 5/5 all the way

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Similar to my favorite style in poetry to read. I liked the title of this it was capturing. Thats what got me interested from the start. A short piece which held sad emotions.

    well done. Loved it alot.

    5/5
    ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I didn't like the last three lines, how it was all one sentence and you didn't seem to break it up too well. I felt that some of the word choice was not exactly great, but overall, I felt you chose a good title and scene.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done,
    a very good poem, it was sad, short but meaningful.
    emotion portrayed well.
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    Okay! This poem exactly describes my friend. Makes me think of her and curious of how she's always like that. Hmm. 5/5

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