Depressed Flower

by unknown   Jun 4, 2007


Jasmine isn't my equal
Even rose can't be comparable with my beauty
Wasn't it a gift?
Weren't you proud?

My -3 months on your womb- dad
Wanted a better life
It wasn't my sin
Totally wasn't
But you bore me with loathe
Raise me with hate

Once, a butterfly found this flower
Although he couldn't offer a heavenly life,
He warmed me up everyday
Everyday, before you dragged him to drugs

My life is worse than yours
Aren't you satisfied?
Isn't it enough?

God, I was nobody
I am nobody
And if I'm going to through this, I will be nobody
Just forgive her and let me go to Your side.

-Thanks to my friend, Meythia. She gave me a story to inspire me. But, I ensure you that she's NOT the "depressed flower" ^^

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Okay this poem was good. But it reminded me of one of those poems you'd read in an old book in the library not saying your poem is bad but I just didn't understand. Even though it confused me I still found myself loving it.
    4/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I think that you could wrote this piece better. This is just my opinion but I don't like atmosphere of this poem. Topic is interesting and this poem deserves 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    WOW! this is really powerful 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    This was a great poem but imma go with Mira on this one...it was complicated but very nice...dont take that as a let down im just dumb ^^

    Noelle

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was beautifully written, but it was sad, i dont know how anybody could raise a child with hate, great work, 5/5

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