Let Me Free

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 6, 2007


Let Me Free

I walk in caged walls,
The world staring back,
Unknowing where I'm going,
As my spirits crack,

A life I once knew,
But grew colder every day,
Waiting in the shadows,
As my soul starts to fray,

Slumped in the darkness,
I cry all my fears,
Nothing, I am no one,
Drowning in each tear,

Love was never there,
And they knew it too,
Cutting me like flowers,
Carving me to blue,

Alone as I wander,
A shallow thought concours,
Crawling through my being,
A shallow act occurs.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem was really deep and it was great! There was tons of emotion in it and I can relate to it, as I know other can. You did a great job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The flow was smooth and the words awesome. Definitely something cool. You have a talent to turn anything from the profound to the tedious and bland into a cool write. I love the imagery and how it all blends together quite well.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I love your abstract view to the speaker's emotions and/or feelings. The metaphors used blew me away, and my favorite line, though all were profound, was:
    "Cutting me like flowers,
    Carving me to blue,"
    You continue to make my mind wander in different poetry techniques and different views to look upon. Keep it up, you have a nice comfortable spot on my favorite's list.

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