by lish Jun 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Baby your my shining star |
by shantavia
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I love this peom |
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Written* |
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Nicely writted, good portrayal of emotions as well. The flow is a little off at times, but nothing to major. |
by Adelle
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Again this poem needs work on the grammar the questions are good because they engage the reader but you need to capitalize the start of your sentences. |