Wow! how real!

I hope for your sake this poem isn't written from personal experience, sorry if it is.

The flow worked really well for the poem, and the wording was great. I like the topic too, sad I know, but it doesn't get done all the time.

Sam

It like it!!
it was really amazing i can feel your emotions.so sad and so emotional..

keep it up!
take care!

Sad but great poem. can feel youre emotions.. 5/5

Excellent! its hella good

I pray to goodness this wasn't true. But wow! What an excellent piece of poetry. I'm never one for cussing in poetry, but besides that, it was brilliant and i wanted to cry and it was so emotional!
Charisma*

WOw!!
Great job I totally loved it it's wonderful!! Very touching and full of emotion!!!
Great job keep it up!!
5/5
Take care

Wow, this is really sad and has strong emotions...
very well written!

Wow this poem is so sad. so beautifully written, i enjoyed reading this poem. you are really talented.

Wahahahaw! you're getting better and better, huh..
I loved it... 5/5-)

I love the whole story and all the words behind of this poem. there are lots of emotions that i can truly relate. it has a dept meaning and the whole stanza are truly expressed very well....very touch and sad piece! i enjoyed it 5/5

keep it up and GOD bless....

At first, I love your rhyme scheme. Then I'm amazed with the flow> And also you make me drown to the emotion. It's an excellent one!!!! It's worth 5/5!!!

The theme of this well written poem has moved me emotionally. I am at a loss for words at this moment

Full of emotions, the flow stayed on track, and you managed to get the message out clear and strong.

Well done,
5/5 Elly.