Planet Hell

This is awesome. I know I'm learning from the right person when I read this. I can see exactly were u are coming from. They say psychological disease is derived from genetics. When really every person with a mind can be diagnosed with something or another. its seemingly just another way to lable lower levels of society and keep control. The elite are the one giving the diagnosis and approving benifits to keep them in poverty. Its a well oiled machine.
Great stuff!!!

"Bi-polar, schizophrenics or even psychosis
Cure their illness by doubling their doses
How many times have they got to hit bottom,
Before a solution is found to their problem?"

I loved that stanza. It hit the nail on the head perfectly to a question i've been thinking about lately.
Excellent structure and rhythm m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Wow that was an excellent poem of the real way life is these days. You did a remarkable job on this piece and stayed with it from start to finish great job. It's sad the world has come to this, thanks for sharing. your friend , Tracy dean 5/5

Very intense and deep piece. This really gives a good message about what our world is turning into.

Societies child just begging for attention
Falls to the wayside we forgot to mention
Black markets, name a price, it's all for sale
Revolution, no solution, Hey! It's planet Hell

These lines are great.
Take Care
Cindy

Kay,

We have evolved into a world that thinks a pill can cure anything. It's like name your symptom... yea there's a pill for it. The bad thing is the side effects of most drugs are worse than the symptoms. Of course, then you have the pills that counter the side effects. What a devesting world we live in today.

Great poem, message was right on and the flow well done.

Always,
Jeannie