The way we were

by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell   Jun 6, 2007


What happened to us,
we use to be so perfect
it use to be so worth it
but now we barely speak
now im losing sleep
wonderin if yu still care
wonderin why yur not here
lost alone and afraid
got nothing left to gain
all i feel is pain
why do i feel so lame
neither of us are to blame
images in my brain
like pictures in a frame

-Jessyka-

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  • 18 years ago

    by mary oneson

    This is short,
    but the emotion is strong
    and you get your point across.
    great job

  • 18 years ago

    by xXVampiraXx

    I like this one.
    Its exactly how i feel about my ex...
    Your better at writing then me >.<
    thanks for the comments.

  • 18 years ago

    by reborn

    Very good poem! 5/5!
    just the last 2 verses which in my opinion are too short. they could use adjectives like for example:
    "sweet images in my brain
    like memorable pictures in a frame"

    Just a suggestion... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it girl:):):)
    so keep up the good work:):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I really like this poem alot i know how you feel thats how i felt to my loved one, but you know you can let im go but if you can i know how it is keeep it up very good

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