I liked the meaning you portrayed behind this poem it was great. The style and ryhme scheme was different which was interesting and the flow was nice. Well done on writing such a unique peice of poetry which was nicely penned holding strong emotions~mel

Exquisite piece.
It had really good flow and I liked the rhymes and emotions in it are strong and greatly expressed.
5/5

Oh i can so relate to this poem thats why i gave it 5/5 it deserves soo much more :)

Very deep and touching, Long but just kept me reading. Loved the story in it. Emotions were strong and it's just heart breaking. Amazing poem!
Keep writing.
5/5

Ohh I like this. The emotion was great and drew me within it. Nice job

Me likey a lot it was pretty dang close to perfect goo job
-laura-

Loved this poem!>..gr8 write
hope to readmore like it soon
keep it up 5/5
bree x

It was deep yet you portrayed the meanings perfectly. I would give you a 5/5

Such a sad poem. It's almost heart breaking how that's prolly more then likely true. The flow was off, but can simply be fixed by putting it into stanzas.

It was truly emotional i loved it
but it was sad

I liked it on wait i loved it
ps it was sad but steel i liked :)