REality

by Jaded Serenity   Jun 8, 2007


The violence the exceeds his mouth
is so powerfully vain.

Cuts deep with in my soul,
cause my heart much despair and pain.

Have i done something daddy?
Why are you so mean?

You caddy around your arrogance.
You loom over every aspect of my life.

I glace back at the memories.
Violence, yelling, and strife.

Can you see what you've done?
Are you that blind to the reality's...
Or do you pretend that they are not there.

I see them daddy, i live them.
you let your liquor take over you.

I play back the dim flashes of violence.
I've had to ask for apology, you say them on cue.
Then hence forth your wild rage.
Turn yet another page of my fear.

Are you that blind to the reality's...
or do you pretend that they are not there?

*** please comment, i worked hard on this one

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    I really like this poem. I could feel the emotion. you did a really good job at capturing that certain emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    No kidding. i could tell you worked very hard on that poem. its great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Yeah, omg this is something i can really connect with because I have/am in this situation....but looser now.....i Like it, so swiftly and gently written so easily understood, like the innocence of a child..

    0_0" omg...lovely

    =) HEY thanks for ur comment 2 and PLZZ look at my REAL account,

    HiddenKiss

    thank you xx =p

  • 16 years ago

    by Laith

    Real good, I loved it deep, true and perfectly writen, I wanna read more of this kind.

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    A sad poem. The hard work really shows. I love the flow. Keep writting and you will go far!