Little Miss innocent

by Lemonbread   Jun 9, 2007


Sweet and Innocent
Like the flowers in spring
Caring and warming
Fixing an angel's wing

If this is how you knew me
You were wrong
If you thought you knew me
You will never know the real me

Pages in my life are torn
The printed words of my past
Bloody and raw
Sliced with a knife

Acting as if nothings wrong
Acting as I am
Little Miss innocent
In disquise

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    The title really caught my attention, "Little Miss Innocent". Your flow was great, and the choice of words was brilliant! The reference to angel's wings also made me like this poem even more! Honestly, a full 5/5!

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist
    Moogle Lover

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I really loved this one =) I do this everyday of my life hiding behind that mask =P A great poem that flowed really good and the choice of words was good also =) Great work and keep it up =)
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Don't worry people will soon know the inner you if the inner you shines through like it did in this poem 5/5 great wording and a brilliant reading

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