I'll be free once more

by Lemonbread   Jun 9, 2007


High in the sky
Seagulls fly
Over the deep blue sea

On land they cry
The rope raised high
Above the pirate's head

Once free like the birds
Roaming the seas
Now caught in chains

With the rope around his neck
He sighs and says
"I'll be free once more,"

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Wow, this is a very well writen poem! I agree with previous commenters that the last line really made this poem. The flow was really good, the words, the topic, everything wored together really well.
    Keep it up! Woot, hehe, 5/5.

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist
    Moogle lover

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Awww i really like this one, especially the ending line when he sday "I'll be free once more" 5/5 i guess its what most people dream of...

    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Hehehe I really liked this lols Short, cute, well formed and the flow was great =) 5/5 =D
    and thanks for the comments =) I love your profile also lols
    Rhea

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