I definately know what it's like to still be inlove with somebody after all that time, and as much as you want to just forget about it and stop loving them you can't. I loved this poem and it was something that I could relate to so well, I could have wrote these exact words that's how indentical it is. The flow was good and the word choice as well, excellent job 5/5

Mmm ... I suggest reading this out loud once or twice . Some of the lines seemed a word or two too long for some stanzas . Work on syllabication ? But, overall the poem was well written . Good word choise; the ending worked really well, though the subject is pretty over used . But I definitely know what it's like to still feel for somebody .

..__MiNDYY

THIS IS REALLY GOOD I CAN TOTALLY RELATE.

This is going to add my favorite poem.. Speechless, flow easily through.. Ahh u got good talented..

This is going to add my favorite poem.. Speechless, flow easily through.. Ahh u got good talented..

This was such a sentimental poem. You really captured the emotions in it, and I felt as though it was happening to me. Very good job! Excellent writing. 5/5

Realy i love this one , nice flow, so sweet and my favorite part when you say:You really were my other half
And we went for four years strong.
But things go wrong and people change
I guess you and I just don' t belong.
you felling come through , i feel it like if me in your place , keep write in this way,noha

Great work. You never do forget but you sometimes find something better.

I know its hard letting go of people you love trust me i know ..... but in the end u let them go or keep them either way just try not to hurt yourself in the mean time.

This is pretty good! Awesome poem! 5/5