Drowning in despair.

by MissAlyssaGraff   Jun 10, 2007


This place is chaos,
it's so confusing.
This place that's my home,
makes me feel like hiding.

At home you're not supposed to hide,
it's a place that's your own.
A place to confide!

But how can I confide,
when there's noone listening?
The water's above my head,
I think I'm drowning.

Drowning in despair.
my fear is growing aware.

There's nothing I can do.
It's hopeless you see.
I deal with it all the time.
It's getting pretty lengthy.

It's getting to the point where I don't want to come home,
I'd be happier with my aunt,
but is that what I really want?

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh no, I hope you don't feel that way...because home is well its home. I loved this poem though! It's so flowing, and so rhythmic. At the end, the last two rhymes threw me off because I don't pronounce "aunt" like you do. But once I read "want" it made sense. But overall this poem is BRILLIANT!