Red tears

by Gamaliel munoz   Jun 12, 2007


I feel empty
I feel alone

I feel stupid for seeing
Some thing good in your soul

I don't want you back
So stop bugging now
But i rather be single then seeing you
Once more

What!! now you think life is so sad and cold?
You need to stop
Calling my phone

You hurt me so bad
I'll never for get that

You picked up a sword
You stabbed me in my heart
Pretending like nothing was wrong

Feeling the blood so cold
Run down my chest hitting the floor

Why??? i asked
I really thought we would last

In slow motion feeling
Details of new pain
That i never felt before

Remembering the blood puddle
My tears splashing creating small Little waves
When it was all over
I just looked down
And smiled

I was alone

Color and sound
Was nowhere to be found
Not even my shadow was around

The pain will never go away
I died that day

My body is alive
But my soul will rest
And stay dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Good poem i think the spelling/grammer needs a little work but other than that its really gud!! its full of emotion and feeling
    5/5
    luv Fallen

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This one was really great =) You got the point and the feelings across so good =) The flow was a little hard to find at first but after I found it...Wow lols Your choice of words was really great on this one also =) 5/5 =D
    Rhea