I can relate to these words so well, in a relationship we always say forever but we fail to realize just how long forever is. Excellent poem and great emotion and imagery throughout - 5/5 GG23

This was good, it was very beautiful yet sad in a sort of hopeless way. the poem flowed well and was very strong in itself
you are an amazing poet
5/5
gabriella

Awww. This is such a sad but wonderful written poem. I've enjoyed reading your wonderful poems! Keep up the wonderful work! Thank you very much for the comments. God Bless 5/5
<3Tay

I love the Hell's prison line, I thought that was very effective, my other favourite part was the ending line, I found that to be very intense and gripping.
This whole piece is heartbreakingly sad, and yet so beautifully written at the same time.
I loved the flow in this, despite choosing not to rhyme, I thought the flow was very good throughout...beautiful work.

Aww this is such a sad, yet beautifully enned poem, i really captured me- and was very hartfelt.. the ending stana was really well written;
This will be my last farewell for you my angel..
I will always and forever love you with all my heart..
"Your love is engraved in my heart, its just beside
The scar you gave me when you broke my heart.."
^ it was so emotional, and i could really feel what you were saying . You portrayed your feelings very well throughout this poem. An amazing write.
5/5
xXx

Aww that so sad 5/5

Not good its beautiful i actully cried its my favourite poem out of yours and i think you have a special gift writing from your heart is the only way you should write other wise what you have written is not true

5/5

Never down talk ur poetry..if it's from ur heart then it's beautiful in it's own way. i think it was great and very sad. people come and go out of our life..all we can do is make our choices and let life run it's course. 5/5

xxMandaxx

Heartfelt emotion, again vivid imagery, brillant word choice, wll written poem you have here keep up the excellent work 5/5

Are you kidding, this was an amazing poem. it's so sad.
I really like the words blissfull delusion together.
at this part,
"And now my tears is like the river Nile."
do you mean are like the river Nile?
keep writing
peace
soffe

Strong poem really great.. i loved the "But I am nobody in her eyes
not even an insect to her..
Our laughter and sorrow is just a memory..
Fading slowly as time passes by.."

i know that same feeling good job

The emotion is expressed really well in this piece. I could tell it was heartfelt. The flow wasn't amazing, but I think overall this is a beautifully written, sad love poem. 5/5

marcella

The poem was good. The word choice was great, the flow was a little shaky but still decent, and the concept was good. I could really tell you felt this while writing it. But you could've revised it afterwards a little... Its still really good, but I think you could've wrote it a little better. Still a 5/5 Nice job :P

Very sad. But full of emotions, greatly portrayed through your great choice of words. Your descriptions were great and the beginning really drew me in and held until the end. A well deserved 5/5. :]

Awww....this is really emotional and sad. if you need anyone to talk to i am here....i am a great listener...

private message me if you want...and please r/r/c one of my poems please?

Wow. its great. although, i must admit, there were things that could have been changed. but it came from your heart.

to be truthful, the flow was good, the rhyme scheme confused me a little. but i hardly noticed. the emotion in it is amazing.

i would say there was a certain part that i liked, but there were to many that were amazing.

great poem. 5/5 keep it up.

~LoRa

I liked this alot it was very touching and it brought tears to my eyes ur a talented person! lol don't forget to return the favor I just wrote a new poem but it sucks i just was upset it's "It Was Never YOu It was Always Me" it is really not a great poem but i hoped someone could help me understand my own thoughts....

This was a GREAT poem and from the heart...............Keep it up............Your great........