Dans les arbres

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 12, 2007


A little girl thought she found love in a boy
that boy bought her a necklace saying its real
when she found out it's fake
she headed for the lake
to droned her sorrow

on her away she found two tree's
she climbed the tree all the top
there she jumped to the next tree
as she jumped her necklace cough
she died that day on a branch faraway

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Poems great, so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Topshop princess

    Good poem. fix the mistakes and it'll be perfect
    makes for brilliant reading =]
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was an interesting story and pretty much real
    And I would like to help about something
    away-way
    But I liked the sorrow here
    Good job,
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a good poem. It needs a bit of fixing up in places but it is still good. 'to droned her sorrow' should be 'to drown her sorrow. i think appart from that it is a well written sad poem. 5/5

    Kalee

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