Red Paint

OH MY GOD, omg. Wow, omg i'm shaking. That was such a good poem. Omg, wow. Holy, i am in shock. Omg, this was amazing. Omg, the twist was unimaginable. Omg, how did you do this?! omg omg omg. I love it!!

I clear my head of anger
and look at the wall
I see no holes
my eyes are drawn down
down to my chest
and I see the paint
the red paint

that part was incredible! omg, you did an amazing job! and it came from you heart, pure talent keenan. It really showed in this poem. Great job

I really like this one I think it makes you think twice about what you are writting about and when you finally read it with an open mind you totally get the whole thing. Muah talk to you later.

Beck

Omg! that is awesome. i really really like it. so dark but it has a lot of depth behind it. Excellent job! : )

Hummm this is way dark I loved it

In effect, this piece reminded me about a certain individual (i.e. Dorian Gray...), whose soul he'd sold to the devil, trying to break the 'curse' by stabbing an object with a dagger. I further sensed the need for coherent details, though. Nonetheless, it never failed to get my attention and interest into it. Interestingly captivating on my part to say the least. Nice job. --Debbie.