I wanna be a man

by IMMORTAL PAIN   Jun 13, 2007


Commotion constanltly stabbing me,
people wont let me go,
nothing i can do,
but jus go wit da flow....

i wanna be a man,
but u wont allow me too,
tryin to walk threw the door of happiness
but u arent lettin me threw

your making me go crazy,
ur makin me go psycho,
i wanna be a man mom,
this is lifes cycle,

i wasnt happy there,
i wont ever be,
plz jus let me be a man,
ur killing me cant u see?

when i try to be a man u call me a boy
when i act like a boy u say im too old for that
wat do i do mom?
your killing me...

u wanna keep your boy around,
so just let me be a man
im doin so much mommy,
im doin the best i can,

one day i wanna raise a family,
but i wont be able too,
cuz ur not letting me open that door that i need to walk threw

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    Wow, that makes me wanna tell Mother a thing or two.Mother doesn't seem to realize, I can do most things haha, but right now I'd still consider me a baby, I need Mother&&Daddy.Honestly, good poem I like the way youu wrote it too.It expresses youu(:

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    That was very nice - and very common for mum's not to let their son's grow up - trying to always protect them from the world. Its good to get your emotions out about it. Good write. I would just suggestion you spell the word "through" instead of "threw" in your poem.

    Thanks for the read.

    Mo

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    Thats beautiful....really powerful and expressive! brilliant!...be a man...be want you want

    ~maria

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