Immortal Pain

by IMMORTAL PAIN   Dec 2, 2009


Everlasting depression, going insane,
tortured thoughts and immortal pain,
these feelings rushing threw my brain,

In my mind there is no rest,
Tranquil thoughts, less and less,
trapped inside pandora's box,
chained so tight, titanium locks...end of poem

sorry i caught writers block. if anyone can help me finish this i will give them credit. thanks.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    NO no !! its perfect the way it is. Not all poems have to be long. for instance I wrote Black and its an anagram and it only has 5 lines. but yes this I loved, the darkness in it just wowed me. You really took the words and made them your own.

    my favorite lines were:

    tortured thoughts and immortal pain
    &&
    Tranquil thoughts, less and less

    More more!
    6/5

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