You Can't take Everything

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   Jun 13, 2007


You can take my peace.

You can take my hope.

You can take my strength.

You can take my power.

You can take my love.

You can take my faith.

But you, my dear.... Cannot take my painful memories that you gave me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was great i was not ready for the endding. but i do feel bad for you. im sorry. i give it a 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    This is a very good poem . A bold statement that left me thinking , they wont be taking anything from you.
    I liked the concept, style and the flow

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was good! i liked the repetitiveness, its good. Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Loved this poem!
    memories are evrything we will always have
    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very short and to the point poem and I enjoyed it but the best part was the end great job I loved it Plot121

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