Men and Mascara

by Daisy if you do   Jun 14, 2007


Men and Mascara is all she needs
Fulfilling a promise of dirty deeds
Around the pole she swings her leg
Sultry looks that make them beg

Bottle blonde tresses cover her breast
Imagination and fantasy cover the rest
Smoke, alcohol and cheap perfume
The only smells that fill the room

Tossing their money in a night of fun
They crowd the stage until she is done
Dignity for dollars and a raunchy stage name
Is all she has for fifteen minutes of fame

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, every stanza is excellently written.
    Good job on this one, I love your work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was a totally awesome poem, vocabulary was excellent and well written , flow was lovely and you got the point across very clear, great job . keep it up your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Dignity for dollars and a raunchy stage name
    Is all she has for fifteen minutes of fame"

    I've heard and seen alot of things and I just question myself. Why do girls feel it is okay to degrade themselves? We should all learn how to have more self pride for ourselves, and some dignity too. Great views in this poem.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This could almost be considered a dark write as it left shivers down my spine. I don't know why.

    The flow was very good, and message was clear.

    Well done.

    Always,
    Jeannie

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