A mad man's lullaby.

by Solus   Jun 15, 2007


Hush little child don't you tell,
if you do daddy's going to make you yell.

Steal your innocence with this pain,
to break your mind is my big aim.

Its alright just be my toy,
your suffering is what brings me joy.

I want you to cry and weep,
see dark nightmares in your sleep.

Soon the devil shall reward me,
demons will gather you just wait and see.

You bad little puppet you can't escape,
your life is mine for me to rape.

Now you can't tell if you're sane,
and so your tears will fall like rain.

Shadows dwell within your soul,
bury your hope down in a hole.

I must leave but not for long,
daddy's always with you even if I'm gone.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rolo

    Horribly creepy, and very dark. I really hate how I know that some people truly think this way. I think you captured the evil in this story perfectly. From a writing perspective, I really enjoyed it. Good flow, rhyming...and ideas. From a more realistic stand point...I almost hated it. I don't know how to explain this any further...but just know it was a good write. 5/5.

    -Rolo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Mm quite a poem there. very scary yet in the mask of a lullaby. you're a very talented writer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Therisa

    Your poem was excellent. Definetly 5/5. The flow and rhyming was great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Infernus

    I know Solus personally and most of his poems are based on his life. I personally find it amazing that he can share these things with me and others. but yea Amazing poem as usual Solus. oh how it wish it weren't true

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    You've done it again. You had me from start to finish. Please keep writing! Also, message me sometime! I'd love to converse with someone alike in mind. 5/5

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