Lonely Heart [Acrostic]

by Boy   Jun 16, 2007


Lasting love is burning in flame
Only some breathes remain
No one will understand this pain
Every tear looks like a heavy rain
Loneliness hurting inside my brain
Your few past memories give me blame

Happiness is going away from my life
Emotions hurt inside like a sharp knife
All the nights are spending in this strange fight
Remaining part of my story is becoming hiding
This voice of lonely heart is going for suicide

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful poem by you BUT I think you are wrong when you think others won't understand your pain. The feeling of grieve over losing a beloved one is universal.

    take care, my friend

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Another excellent poem of yours. I like both stanzas very much. You wrote this piece excellently. Ending is great. You described emotions amazingly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this, but at the same time, the fact that most of the piece rhymed and then didn't at the end threw me off.
    I loved the metaphor you used in this piece, it added to the effect very nicely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I was fairly disenchanted by the poem's ending; it wasn't as strong as the others. Nevertheless, I do believe that you've written a fine piece of work in regards to Love. In fact, the emotions emanated by your words made this poem spectacular and delightful to read as well. Nicely done!

    Best wishes,
    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Great technique and wording, really showed how well you can write differently, well done.

    5/5 David

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